Audition Part 3 of 3 (LaF)

Okay, we're done!

This was rushed near the end- a friend of mine needed her tablet back. Mine broke awhile ago. So some of the bubbles, speech-drawings, and effects are either recycled from the other parts or a bit messy. I hope it doesn't distract.

Part II: [link]

As usual, crits and comments are appreciated. Anything I can do to make it more appealing? Technical issues? Color issues? Good story sense? All that jazz.

More color tweaks from the last part. This is primarily because of the in-story color change, but also because of my own error. It will settle out.

Is anyone confused about the text? Eble, Saut and the crows speak in very different ways, notwithstanding formal 'languages' or 'dialects.'

There are a few cameos here! In the fifth panel, Riddley (~StupidShepherd), Sir James Crow (*MJtheMushroom) and Priestess Karasu (without the robe; ~Moongaze14 can be found among the other birdies. The official LaF corvids and the Thief also make their appearance.

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Photoshop CS5, Wacom tablet
approx. 10+ hours, idrk
Eble and Saut are mine


Part I: [link]